[Master's Evaluation Poetry] Song Caixia: Bai Yulu said poem · Episode 38

[Yun Fan Read Reading] Bai Yulu said Poetry · Episode 38

Autumn chrysanthemum

Luo Guojun

The sparse forest fading leaves falling in the west wind, obliquely out of Dongli Xiu Biche.

The covering silver hook is elegant, and the agarwood jade is exquisite.

The frost is not abandoned, and Tu Rui is because of courage.

Lixian is in a proud bone, drunk Tao Gong at the foot of Nanshan.

[Comment] Inheriting the second couplet, the momentum is deeply baked. The three -united pen is free, and the knot is also high. Sees skills and charm. If you knock carefully, there are also improved places. If you take a little familiar, individual words such as "Li Shi" and "Depression" are slightly rounded.

The green plum visited South Garden has not opened for a few days

Ma Mingde

The Spring Festival still keeps Niamei, and leaves a few times to return to return.

Qingyi is as old as this year, so why should it be thunderous in bloom.

[Comment] Poetry can not be done for several years, and it is not true. Little poems are like talking. The first two sentences explained the plum that I have always remembered, and looked back and forth several times, intended to dream of the soul. Inject the author's full emotional factors. The three sentences are natural, and the tail sentences are well received. What is implicitly implied by the thunder is the blooming of nature, there is a realm of words.

Shouguang Hi -Tech Chip Research Institute

Li Yiguo

I am in the end of my end, Zhang Gong won the long rainbow.

The spacecraft ignition the explore month, and the minimally invasive bridge can penetrate the chest.

The body can lose the chip, how can Ling Kun carry the sky.

Eventually, the body was soul, and the sword condensed frost.

[Comment] Dongpo Cloud: "Poetry must be done." This song should be the author's collection of the style of the Shouguang Hi -Tech Chip Research Institute. Kai Lian will break the problem with discussion. This poem should be a typical work of the new poem. Such as spacecraft, minimally invasive, exploration of the moon, chest, chip, etc., are just right. The middle two couplets are also alive. It can be described as "there is a Lingyun pen in the vertical and horizontal."

Profile

Song Caixia, a member of the Chinese Writers Association, deputy editor -in -chief of "Chinese Poetry". In his youth, Mr. Xia Chengzhang's Tianfeng Pavilion was the most enlightened, and then he also attacked new poems. Zeng asked Mr. Zhou Duwen and Mr. Shen Tianhong, which benefited at most. Published in the 1980s. Publishing prose collection, poetry collection, poetry review collection, and new collection of poems "Dare to borrow a branch for Dan Xin", "Song Caixia's Works Selection" (Poetry Volume · Comment Volume) "Poetry Science Project" and "Poetry Tide Blue" new poem collection "Black Black" Coffee "and so on.

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