[Master's Evaluation Poetry] Song Caixia: Bai Yulu said Poetry · Episode 42

Huanxi Sand

Zhang Xiaohong

The old mother -in -law, young baby, deserted the depression courtyard. Who cares about the old garden flowers?

Thousands of tears in the corner of the eyes, and another layer of heart. The dependent assembly is luxurious.

[Comment] The cycle has no reason, the meaning is endless, and the little red can be described as sad. Express the left -behind love. The poet uses a modern word in the article, such as "Old Mai's in -laws", "The corners of the eyes, and thousands of tears, and a layer of heart. The tendency, but it is regulated by the rhythm, it has the beauty of ancient and modern integration.

Bodhisattva, sing "two sessions"

Yue Ruxuan

Dongfeng was fortunate to visit Youyan, and Qian Kun was really refreshing. In the dream of red rain, I entered my arms leisurely.

Cangsheng laughed and raised his hands to sweep the clouds. There are three chapters of the law, Shenzhou Wanlixiang.

[Comment] This subject is not easy to write, but the author wrote the wind and water. Most of them are vernacular, but these vernacular words are in their ears. Such poems are strange and poetic, which enhances readability. The ability to write poetry is to catch the vocalist of life with the familiar sentences that can express the beauty of the poetry.

Shaanxi Fugu Qianfo Cave

Forestry

Want to go to the high platform with Baihe, the spring and autumn in the cave opened for the second time.

My Buddha also knows the wind and elegant things, and Zen light comes.

[Comment] This poem is "the person with love rhyme". And describing it, for example, in the apartment, it is intended to speak out. The first two sentences are all settled, the transition is attributed to themselves, and the pen is Shen Xiongqing. "My Buddha also knows the wind and elegant things, and Zen light comes." The deduction of the question is tight, the smell of Zen is strong, and the philosophy is full of philosophy. In this sentence, there are still staying everywhere, the rush is still slow, and you can understand the wonderful use of the pen.

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Song Caixia, a member of the Chinese Writers Association, deputy editor -in -chief of "Chinese Poetry". In his youth, Mr. Xia Chengzhang's Tianfeng Pavilion was the most enlightened, and then he also attacked new poems. Zeng asked Mr. Zhou Duwen and Mr. Shen Tianhong, which benefited at most. Published in the 1980s. Publishing prose collection, poetry collection, poetry review collection, and new collection of poems "Dare to borrow a branch for Dan Xin", "Song Caixia's Works Selection" (Poetry Volume · Comment Volume) "Poetry Science Project" and "Poetry Tide Blue" new poem collection "Black Black" Coffee "and so on.

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